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Disco Queen

 
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nefarious_m
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:18 pm    Post subject: Disco Queen Reply with quote
turn around,
the spotlights on you,
you're a disco queen,
it shows your bones,
I guess gamma rays were a bad idea.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 11:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I love how quickly and quirkily this piece changed its tone in the last line.


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