storytellers

spoonfedsoprano · Scribe Joined: 16 Feb 2008 Posts: 14 Location: KSC

EVAPORATE
I feel like I'm going to melt
Evaporate
Disappear
Every time I think of you
Drowning in the bliss of you
I can't contain
Like an overflowing cup
that wants to be released
But I can't
I'll just have to wait for you
Wait for the blessed moment
Feeling so much inside that I can't understand
My breath is short with the thoughts that I can't control
Can't control what you are doing to me

eleison · Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:36 pm Post subject:

I suggest using "cannot" instead of "can't".

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