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spoonfedsoprano

Still Waters

STILL WATERS
I may seem like still waters just flowing on the surface
But my rivers are running deep inside
I can't believe how captivated I am just by you
In awe, I europhoria, in disbelief that someone has spellbound me
I've never been swept off my feet
and I just can't believe that it has happened to me
My heart can't comprehend the sighs that I have for you
I just don't understand deep inside how anyone could have a hold on me quiet like you
Just feeling a foreign feeling that I don't think I felt before
And just by your kindness and listening
drew my heart to you
I myself cannot handle my own intensity for you
Just chills deep within me by the looks you give me
By your smile on your face
By who you are
eleison

Beautiful, I love how the watery feel "flowed" through all of the poem. I managed to visualize an undercurrent thoughout most of it.

As I said with the last piece of yours I read, you have a real knack for the words I just wonder at why you set up your lines the way you do...

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