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nefarious_m Scribe Joined: 25 Feb 2008 Posts: 3 Location: Orange, MA
Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:41 pm Post subject: I love the valley
I love the valley.
whos fog holds deep on All Souls Day.
and power holds down its residence.
I love the valley
who knows my secrets
tempts me everyday to betray myself
I love the valley
I walk among its trees
I touch its earth
It follows me home
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eleison the librarian Joined: 09 Dec 2007 Posts: 126 Location: The Emerald City
Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 12:08 am Post subject:
"I touch its earth
It follows me home"
I love the imagery and feeling of those last lines.
I have been looking at this piece for quite sometime, trying to come up with something more meaningful to say. Guess what? I failed.
_________________Everywhere I go I find that a poet has been there before me.
~Sigmund Freud~
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