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I love the valley

 
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nefarious_m
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:41 pm    Post subject: I love the valley Reply with quote
I love the valley.
whos fog holds deep on All Souls Day.
and power holds down its residence.

I love the valley
who knows my secrets
tempts me everyday to betray myself

I love the valley
I walk among its trees
I touch its earth
It follows me home
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eleison
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 12:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
"I touch its earth
It follows me home"

I love the imagery and feeling of those last lines.

I have been looking at this piece for quite sometime, trying to come up with something more meaningful to say. Guess what? I failed.
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